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Reviewer: Calilech Signed Date: July 12, 2008 11:55 pm on Prologue: Seven Years Ago

NICE! Along the same lines as my own. I am VERY interested in the direction you are taking. I like this.



Reviewer: Scott Kirkessner Signed Date: July 04, 2008 4:13 am on Chapter 1: Typical Day

Hey this is looking pretty good!

I like the character of Bridget - you do well at making us nervous for her because she has no idea what she is about to get into!

And your interplay between Michael and KITT (and Bonnie) reminded me of the show, just like it should.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm always worried about if I write the canon characters well. :) The next chapter will be up shortly!



Reviewer: Scott Kirkessner Signed Date: July 04, 2008 3:04 am on Prologue: Seven Years Ago

An amazing beginning - especially the inner thoughts of KARR - long forgotten, defeated, still bent on revenge. You captured his inner-self wonderfully!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)



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